Reviews for Thirteen
Art7Freak chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
I'm waiting to find a person out in the world who will say, "I'm here. Everyone else can go jump off a cliff and if you were to as well, I'd supply you with a parachute and we can go together. Everyone else is minor, but we're cool. So we get to be major." ...That would be amazing. Besides, the main characters are awesome. Now I'm just being conceited.
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
This seems sad yet romantic, almost worthy of being compared to a Greek Tragedy. I really like the imagery and the italics - they seem like a whisper or an aside to the person the speaker's talking to; it almost seems like the speaker is pleading to them. This poem is really beautiful and really touched a chord with me. It's a great piece.
sapphireshadow15 chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Oh, wow. I'm in love with this poem...

Such a saddening, and also heartwarming execution. I especially love the lines:

So let's stand here, together, and watch as time ignites the flame.
And when the ember has risen or when ashes fall in a forbidden spiral,
I hope you will still be here with me.

SO impactful. Slightly romantic, as well.

-sapphire
LC.Doyle chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Very moving - thanks for sharing!
Blissful Smile chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Sounds like the song 'Shoulder to Cry On'. Take that a compliment. XD Continue on!
sorrowfulsergeant chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
loved it! people need to take you for more credit than given. Do continue to write.
Mistakes-and-Memories chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Awww! How sweet! I love it!