Reviews for my jaw hurts
ink colored chapter 1 . 1/27/2013
I don't know how you do it, but you somehow manage to bring me back from my massive writing slumps with just a couple of lines. I don't know what it is about your writing that makes me want to pick up a pen and write, but...you're fantastic.

That being said, this poem is haunting. I can't completely wrap my head around the things it makes me feel. I wish I could write things like this.

I'm sorry. I'm being weird now.
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
i really love the tone in your writing. the way you describe things so factually and yet with such stunning imagery (i especially love the fourth stanza).
electrical moon chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
This is beautiful and heart-breaking. The little details like his even breathing as though he's never had a nightmare with the implication that you've had many are amazing. I love the tone, simultaneously at peace and helpless. Fantastic work.
St. Valentine chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
Beaut