|Reviews for Engulfed in Doubt|
| SammieMusicManiac chapter 1 . 9/22/2013
This is a really, really good poem. I can actually relate to it :)
| Misselle Mi chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
I understand the pain of being rejected or breaking up with someone-often times, though, too much of our happiness depends on one single person, and sometimes you don't know them too well. It's worse when you do know the person well because you trusted each other.
Well written, I really can get the feeling of despair, and I like the comparisons to drowning in sorrow.
| bs13 chapter 1 . 1/8/2013
| Owlwhisper chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
| ZoeGray chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
What a great poem! I can just feel the angst.
Thanks for writing!
| Lolitroy chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
Aww... so sad, I understand you in a way. And I love your quote at the beginning! It helped me so much! (you know why I say)
| AquariusGirl230191 chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
Love this! I think most people fear rejection to some extent, after all, usually we get hurt at one time or another. Screw the guy who rejected you! He obviously doesnt know what he's missing :D
Great work :)
| Naver chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
I like this one, I like the last three lines best. A can feel the waves of an ocean pull me in and take me under its really quite amazing. :)
| TinyLaughALot chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
This is so beautiful! I think I'm going to cry!
| St. Valentine chapter 1 . 12/10/2012
You are not alone in your great fear of rejection... This was wonderful