Reviews for Tomboy
hyashi55 chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
waah... so long, but nice... n' one thing i juz hav 2 say,
u always get ausom comments from meh and i get somethin to improve from u.
dude, it's x fair 4 me. u always hav me telling u about how ausom it was, n all u do is make me feel jealous. pls don't feel bad,
cuz if you do, i'll feel sad,
u r my most closest friend, and i'm willing to try and hold your hand, it's like a game for us to play, and everytime we play, u'll always pay, pls give me a chance, to finally have a glance, one what your messaage is, that'll make me miss. u get dat?
i really feel bad u know. i'm not afraid to show, if u r trying to make me better, it just makes me feel more sadder. so say somethin dat'll make me feel ok. just 4 once, and u'll be able to give me a chance... everyday and everytime, i do somethin people say i have to improve on somthin, nothing at all that i do doesn't need improvin. everysingle thing i do needs improving. i actually hate that feeling., i feel that i can't ever improve. EVER! but no offence, it's alrite, not ur fault, it's mine. forever mine. T_T
Naver chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Haha, I found this funny. :)
I hope she enjoys her tomboyishness. :)
And this concludes my review, bye.
yukiteddy chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
cute poem XDD