Reviews for Ashes
TheFrayna chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
This is good, very well thought out with a clear meaning, but the line 'respect didn't mean a hoot' doesn't sem in line with the writing style of the rest of the poem.
Naver chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
Some of this I liked, other parts not to much, (Ironicly because I write rhymes and love them) I think the rhyming makes the meaning less clear and the words don't seem right, something like that.. But I still liked parts of it though. :)

Favorite lines:
"Flames of wisdom slowly burn

the wheels of maturity slowly turn"

They not only fit together,but I can see the gears of time (father time moving them) turn over and over. :)