Reviews for b a t t l e
Shauni Cooper chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
This piece has mysterious edge to it. Kind of like a covered up scar. I love that you got so much raw emotion out of sixty words. That says a lot about your writing! This is quite an exquisite piece and I absolutely love it. Well done! Keep up the good work!

As always, keep writing!

-Shauni
yukiteddy chapter 1 . 12/11/2012
nice poem