|Reviews for Celeste O'Hara|
| AlternatingCurrent chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
You have an ability to put words together to create very descriptive images, and that is a distinctive strong point to this piece. I think you could expand more on what happened with Sebastian, and how much he hurt her. As a reader, I would like to know more about that.
| Irony'sFriend chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
First, I would like to say that your description is just lovely. You chose wonderful words that painted pastel-colored images in my head. You are very talented in that aspect.
However, I had some trouble following the plot. I was quite schocked when Celeste killed herself because I didn't see that coming in the story at all. Maybe I was just missing all the clues, but I think this story could be very good if the events up to Celeste's death were made a little clearer.
Still, it was good, and I hope you keep writing!