Reviews for Red Dawn
readingaddict24 chapter 1 . 11/30/2013
nice work
SilverEclipseTheLerdaun chapter 4 . 2/8/2013
Flashback the best way to tell memories. Gives some suspense, thus making readers want to explore more. :)
SilverEclipseTheLerdaun chapter 3 . 2/8/2013
With the part with Io, the story got my attention so quickly. With the terms and references used for Cahaya, I want to read more now. Onto the next! :)
SilverEclipseTheLerdaun chapter 2 . 2/8/2013
Love the voice in the dialog. Excellence. :)
SilverEclipseTheLerdaun chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
Your descriptions of the children are okay-good. I'm curious as to know what happened to Kailen's father.

I think you should've added a bit more story before the object fell from the sky. Like a little bit about school life and something else. It might attract many different readers. Just saying. :3

I honestly love it so far. Onto the next Chapter for me. :)