Reviews for Unrealistic Optimism
Naver chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
I like the question at the end, very important to the piece it's self in my opinion. I liked the the descriptions!
Favorite lines:
"And let the Thunder play his drums of war,"
"Safe in the knowledge Sun will reign once more."
AppleCrumble chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
I love your sonnets, its so nice to read more of them. The imagery as always is genius, shown through clear speaker and intricate emotions. Another amazing job.
Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
I like the imagery in this piece because it's really clever and helps add to the speaker's views and feelings. It creates such intensity that it suggests that the speaker really does care, about someone (somehow I feel like the speaker is referring to love in someway). This is a great piece, I particularly like the imagery concerning thunder and lightning which were very ingenious by the way. A superb piece which makes me wonder why so few have had the wonderful opportunity to read it. Great piece which deserves a million reviews (I'm not even kidding).
rust phoenix chapter 1 . 12/12/2012
i really like the rhythm of the poem. you use the sonnet form very effectively, you can feel the intensity building throughout the piece.