Reviews for Forever Yours
Wu Mei Mei chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
hahaha it's like that hatsune miku song. :) hee hee.
SaharaLily Nightshade chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
When the hell did you write this, and why have I never seen it before?

Okay. Anyways.

In "And you will be mine, as I am forever yours," switch "yours" and "forever" around so that it reads "...as I am yours forever." Because "slumber" and "forever" are a slant rhyme. And I assume you know what that is, because you just took the English final today.