Reviews for Book Attempt:
Twinkie216 chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
Hmm, well I have some ideas. Could I possibly write a prologue and see if you like it? I can think of a great start to this. Tis sounds like an epic tale. One meant for adventure. :) I would love to get a go at it. I hope to get a reply soon.
This is a great draft. So many things you could do with it.
(Is that mad scientist someone I would know? XD)
Lenellis chapter 2 . 12/21/2012
Well first off I am a little confused about the characters parts but I do have some ideas for it if you'd like to hear them.
lilli chapter 1 . 12/13/2012
since the scientist has expairemented on them, they could becaome genetically mutated and develop abilities! and maybe the guy who kidnaped them could work for the scientist, bringing him new test subjects, the girls could also meet other kids who also have abvilities but escaped the scientists, and live wild, think about it new friends for your characters and maybe... A ROMANCE! ohhh la la
let me know what you think at ""
-lillian

...p.s...have fun...