|Reviews for Torn Asunder Surrender|
| Freiheit98 chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
interesting...very good. please write more.
small note in line 6 prophesys is spelt prophecies...sorry a stickler for spelling but otherwise awesome poem! :D
| ninjakitty7 chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
I love this poem. I can so imagine this and tell what's going on. Way to go!