Second person does come across as psychokinesis, you're right. Plus. what happened? How come such a late update? Just curious.

Pps, you spelled suicidal wrong in the 91st chapter (I'm suicidal) That one. Just to notify.

Keep at this. I really mus learn how to be a better writer, and you're helping immensely. So thank you

Wow. I guess there are too many fine lines in the world.

You're missing quite a few apostrophes here.

[a stories writing style]
*story's

That's just one example, though. I don't have the energy to go and find every last one.

Hmmm, how about narrating a story and saying "what do you think?" somewhere in it? I mean, in one of my stories my narrator pretty much spoke to the readers on a couple occasions, so I dunno...

Ah, I know what you mean now. Nevermind -w-'

I've never heard of this rule... Second person isn't allowed? I'm kinda confused by this...

Ohh, yeah, it took a long time for me to learn not all reviewers like your stories. Never went to the point of demaning a follow though *facepalm*

Romance Twilight Fan Clique can also be applied here. AKA writing about dominating males and *cough* self-inserts supposedly hating them but falling in the end. Ew.

Ohhh the friend clique, haha. I find that rather amusing.

Goodness, what world are we living in!?

Plagiarism is seriously irritating -w-' who can call herself "author" if the only thing she does iscopying others? Lame, lame.

Pffft, blocking people for critiques is just *facepalm*
But the close-mindedness is something related to youth and all of that. Young writers usuallt want only good reviews and wince at the bad one, possibly flame back (that's just lovely). But, a minority actually learns adn tries to get better.

"From understanding comes improvement..."

I didn't shake my head, I facepalmed. But yeah, it is similar.

I've had the same problem dozens of times... oh gosh. The worst part is the stories which need the most improvement are the ones with the most close-minded authors. Stupid vicious circles ;A;

There's even a story flaming me at the beginning for a review I posted -w-' cracks me up everytime I look at it.

I'm guessing it's complete?

Well put together. Thanks and your welcome.

i have a question though.
is making the character, not necessarily the main character evil is considered hate fic?
'cause there's a lot of fanfic making Ron from Harry Potter, deranged, crazy, gay, cheater.
basically any form of defamation, and not to mention ridiculous death.
it's not like i'm a fan of ron, but it seems wrong.
i do enjoy dracoxmione pairing, but its kinda mean.
please, kindly elaborate.

I dislike these people. There are too many of them.

I never delete a review. Of someone wants to be a douche then it will stay there to prove that that person is a douche. Pardon my French.