|Reviews for Just a poem2?|
| hyashi55 chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
so jealouslah... hurr,,, :c T_T
dude, i feel so jealous anyways i just wrote another poem.
it's about children i told you rite? i didn't really remeber the full one but this
is my latest one. it's title is CHILDREN...
| yukiteddy chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
| DaraSerian chapter 1 . 12/14/2012
There were a couple spots in there that didn't flow as easily as the rest, however, I like the simple free style you have. Using plain words and making sound fancy like some poems can be. I like the ones where I don't have to work hard to understand it. This is one of those. Good job.