I think if you'serious adout this series you should do this story first and then figure out a way to add the backstories later because its sooooo interesting to fond out about everything along with honestly,anyone in the future who would not publish it is an idiot it's as goog as PJO!

I may be commenting on an old story, but I have to know:

Did you ever try to roleplay this story on the Neopets forums? Because I once joined a roleplay with this exact premise on the Neopets forums.

This story is incredible. I really like it. I want to talk to you more; it really reminds me of I story I've kinda been writing. My pen name is Igilix. Just send me a message and I'll respond to it soon. I can't wait to keep reading!

I really, really like this story. Reminds me a lot of something I've written, actually kinda weird how similar they are. I can't wait to read more!

Aww! For what it's worth, I enjoyed the story so far. Best wishes for your new stories.

Hi. I just found this story a day or two ago. I REALLY really hope you don't delete this story. You've done such a good job! If it's too stressful right now just set it aside until you feel ready to come back to it. I've been doing the same with one of my stories (it's not on fictionpress). You've got such a great idea here. You show Jenna's emotions and her internal struggle and her view on everything so well that I can see the whole story play out in my head. And the whole serum-not-working plot twist was fantastic. I do believe you have what it takes to be a published author someday. I understand what a hectic life is like. I'm a dancer, I play three instruments, I'm a Thesbian at school, I have lots of homework all the time, I'm doing driver's ed right now, and in all of that I try to find time to read, write, sew, and play some awesome computer games. So I get what it's like. So, please please please please please please don't delete.

the story is interresting, i dont have much to say...
execpt in grammar nazi mode : you have used "you're" in place of "your" a few time

You know, u should finish this story and get it published :).
Coz I would buy it.
It's that good:)
And I really like this anyway, great idea and so so so intriguing. I find myself getting to the end of a chapter and going, " there better be another chapter after this!"
Which btw, means I really really really love your story. :)

This is interesting! I can't wait to see what's going to happen! Update soon!

I read your other account on Fanfiction and I loved it! Especially Blocking Out The Painful Things…anyways, I love this story just as much, if not more because it's not based off an actual book (correct me if I'm wrong). Update soon please!

Please write more! I loe this tory so much!

I love this story! I only read the 1st chapter so far, but I really like it! Please continue writing!

awesome beans! I like the style you write so the other story would be great to post. just saying: WOOT FOR SUMMER!

I started reading this on Noveljoy and thought that it was absolutely completely and utterly amazing and awesome! :D you have been a real inspiration to me and whenever I get an e-mail from Noveljoy I just hope and hope that it means another chapter to read! (: You've done an amazing job on this story and I am sure that your dreams of becoming an author will come true! I am as obsessed with this story as I am with some of my favourite books, and THAT'S saying something ;) so yeah, I just wanted to say congratulations for your awesomeness and I think my cat wants to eat my notebook... :S saved! Heh. Keep writing, and good luck for the future! :)
Alaena32644 x

P.S. sorry that was a bit long, I'm just a bit excited... :P

Nice ch. like usual. It wasn't to Dysney at all I think and I feel good and bad about ur job. I feel good for u and I feel bad because ur to going to have as much time to write D:
Plz ceep writing!

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