Reviews for The Theory Behind the Phoenix
Anon chapter 1 . 5/5
I may be commenting on an old story, but I have to know:

Did you ever try to roleplay this story on the Neopets forums? Because I once joined a roleplay with this exact premise on the Neopets forums.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/22/2014
This story is incredible. I really like it. I want to talk to you more; it really reminds me of I story I've kinda been writing. My pen name is Igilix. Just send me a message and I'll respond to it soon. I can't wait to keep reading!
Igilix chapter 1 . 7/23/2014
I really, really like this story. Reminds me a lot of something I've written, actually kinda weird how similar they are. I can't wait to read more!
EventualHorizon chapter 19 . 6/23/2014
Aww! For what it's worth, I enjoyed the story so far. Best wishes for your new stories.
Faylinn Notchwood chapter 19 . 6/24/2014
Hi. I just found this story a day or two ago. I REALLY really hope you don't delete this story. You've done such a good job! If it's too stressful right now just set it aside until you feel ready to come back to it. I've been doing the same with one of my stories (it's not on fictionpress). You've got such a great idea here. You show Jenna's emotions and her internal struggle and her view on everything so well that I can see the whole story play out in my head. And the whole serum-not-working plot twist was fantastic. I do believe you have what it takes to be a published author someday. I understand what a hectic life is like. I'm a dancer, I play three instruments, I'm a Thesbian at school, I have lots of homework all the time, I'm doing driver's ed right now, and in all of that I try to find time to read, write, sew, and play some awesome computer games. So I get what it's like. So, please please please please please please don't delete.
wolfgang.durand chapter 14 . 6/23/2014
the story is interresting, i dont have much to say...
execpt in grammar nazi mode : you have used "you're" in place of "your" a few time
Guest chapter 6 . 5/8/2014
You know, u should finish this story and get it published :).
Coz I would buy it.
It's that good:)
And I really like this anyway, great idea and so so so intriguing. I find myself getting to the end of a chapter and going, " there better be another chapter after this!"
Which btw, means I really really really love your story. :)
Aquade chapter 18 . 3/5/2014
This is interesting! I can't wait to see what's going to happen! Update soon!
Soccer688 chapter 18 . 1/21/2014
I read your other account on Fanfiction and I loved it! Especially Blocking Out The Painful Things…anyways, I love this story just as much, if not more because it's not based off an actual book (correct me if I'm wrong). Update soon please!
Guest chapter 16 . 7/17/2013
Please write more! I loe this tory so much!
Pookster chapter 1 . 7/17/2013
I love this story! I only read the 1st chapter so far, but I really like it! Please continue writing!
Wcatsgirl566 chapter 16 . 5/24/2013
awesome beans! I like the style you write so the other story would be great to post. just saying: WOOT FOR SUMMER!
Alaena32644 chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
I started reading this on Noveljoy and thought that it was absolutely completely and utterly amazing and awesome! :D you have been a real inspiration to me and whenever I get an e-mail from Noveljoy I just hope and hope that it means another chapter to read! (: You've done an amazing job on this story and I am sure that your dreams of becoming an author will come true! I am as obsessed with this story as I am with some of my favourite books, and THAT'S saying something ;) so yeah, I just wanted to say congratulations for your awesomeness and I think my cat wants to eat my notebook... :S saved! Heh. Keep writing, and good luck for the future! :)
Alaena32644 x

P.S. sorry that was a bit long, I'm just a bit excited... :P
jacob07 chapter 14 . 4/18/2013
Nice ch. like usual. It wasn't to Dysney at all I think and I feel good and bad about ur job. I feel good for u and I feel bad because ur to going to have as much time to write D:
Plz ceep writing!

sharpbreeze chapter 13 . 4/16/2013
i've read the summary of the beginning of the end. i wonder if this story is the continuation of TBOTE ? because, in chap 14 there are memories with Jenna having a younger brother and there is also Ian. so...

P.S i wrote this on reviews because i can't PM right now due to some rule that i can't PM anyone at my first 24 hours here.
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