Reviews for The Depths of Lorelei
DWest chapter 1 . 5/5/2021
I really enjoyed reading your book. This deserves a lot of audience. Why don't you publish it in NÅ‘velStar?And they also have an on-going competition that you might want to join.
Fading-Scream chapter 2 . 12/18/2012
Quite an interesting start, and I can see that there is a stack of potential in this so I'm interested in seeing where you will take it. Well done, I look forward to reading more.
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Naver chapter 2 . 12/16/2012
This is more interesting then the first part. The flashback was good, it made me more interested in this. As for past the that, interesting, I'm still waiting for an element of more intense fear. Maybe different description would give this? I did like this chapter though.. Continue to write. :)
Naver chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
Hmm.. I was not very fearful of him. Hmm... Something about this... Hmm... Hmm... It wasn't that thrilling or scary in my opinion... Hmm... hmm...