Reviews for Unexpected Wonders
Lele Winchester chapter 23 . 3/14/2013
Wow I love your story, it's so cool, the relationship between Keilee and Niall is just so adorable and sweet I can't wait for the next chapter! :)
ThisEnglishGal chapter 23 . 3/14/2013
Oh my gosh I love this story, I'm hooked on this so much! please keep writing more
The punctuation and grammar is so good.
There is nothing much I'd say was wrong with this story so far!
Keep up the good work!
LoveDreamLive chapter 21 . 2/21/2013
The only spelling mistake I can see is in the word 'starring' there should only be 1 'r'. Maybe someone else will spot another one, keep up the good work with the story I'm really looking forward to see how things work out for the characters now.
twilightwinter chapter 20 . 2/16/2013
Nooooooooooo he can't sell the guitar!
twilightwinter chapter 19 . 2/8/2013
Awww that's so cute pkw
Funshine Tonks chapter 19 . 2/4/2013
PLease contiue! Amazing story!
twilightwinter chapter 18 . 1/31/2013
Um nice butkinda boring
twilightwinter chapter 17 . 1/27/2013
Wow exciting!
jake da snake chapter 1 . 1/18/2013
OMFG I GOT SO HORNYY BY READING THIS IT IS SO INCREDIBLE OMGGGGGGGG ;)
twilightwinter chapter 16 . 1/19/2013
I love it please keep writing!
meganarcher1114 chapter 16 . 1/18/2013
Oh my...I have no words. I love this story please write more!
twilightwinter chapter 15 . 1/13/2013
No I hate it when people leave cliff hangers please keep writing!
twilightwinter chapter 14 . 1/12/2013
No keep writing! Terrible place to stop!
twilightwinter chapter 13 . 1/9/2013
Umm ya kinda uninteresting but I understand some times you just got to get information in there
alchem chapter 12 . 1/8/2013
Great start, interesting characters. But, where are the parents? Does Nial live alone? There is a level of the story that is missing. Please continue to write.
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