Reviews for Unexpected Wonders
LoveDreamLive chapter 11 . 1/4/2013
Hi, I'm really enjoying your story the only thing I can see wrong is a few spelling mistakes and maybe misplaced comma's but that isn't ultra important so I wouldn't bother with it, I am interested to see where you are going to go with this story now and I look forward to reading your next chapters, well done again and keep up the good work.
twilightwinter chapter 11 . 1/3/2013
Sweet lobe it please keep writing and let her lover come to the rescue!
B. R. Rose chapter 11 . 1/3/2013
Ooooohh snap.
rerte10 chapter 10 . 1/1/2013
Awesome!
twilightwinter chapter 10 . 1/1/2013
Love it please keep writing
B. R. Rose chapter 4 . 12/26/2012
Okay. Your paragraphs are impossibly long and kinda hard to read. And EVERYTIME A PERSON SPEAKS THAT DIDN'T JUST SPEAK...A NEW LINE STARTS, OKAY? OKAY.
Other than that, this is good.
Guest chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Great story! I want to see what happens!

Esme
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