|Reviews for Glassy Grass|
| Swanfrost15 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
That was pretty good!.
Remember, paragraphs are your best friend. One huge paragraph makes it really unapealling, and as a reader, I just want to click the back button. You should edit it to multiple paragraphs.
Other than that, the story it's self was really good.
| yukiteddy chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
ouch that must have hurted bad :/