Reviews for Husband for the Holidays |
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![]() ![]() You know I realise that they haven’t actually said I love you properly - which is quite refreshing to have characters show their love so clearly through their words and actions instead of just the cop out I love you phrase |
![]() ![]() I would pay to read more of this story. Like 1000 pages worth of Carter and Preston |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! This story wasn't what I was expecting at all... it's way better! I was caught up in the story after the third paragraph, and of course I'm always in for the Fake/Pretend trope... Their relationship was really perfect and all I could do was swoon thinking of Carter with the kids. Bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know how many times I'v read this, it always hits that emotional spot, but it balances it with the sweet and silly moments. I hope you're still writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved your story. Everything came together beautifully. My favorite enjoyment is reading well written completed stories. |
![]() ![]() I love this story. It's very well written and the pacing is good. My only beef is that Preston shouldn't have apologized first. He had nothing to apologize for. Carter is a jealous asshole and I didn't see him changing at all. If anything Carter should be the one chasing after Preston and begging him to come back. Makes my blood boil. Imagine being in Preston's position. No body in their right mind would crawl back unless they were desperate. Preston didn't seem desperate. I think he should have been way angrier and Carter should have owned up for Preston leaving. Instead, lucky him Preston seems pretty forgiving of his infidelity. If anything this likely encourages future escapes. Otherwise than this. I totally enjoyed the story. |
![]() ![]() The twins are such qt patooties! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love! |
![]() ![]() ![]() such a lovely story. The part about the earrings nearly did me in. Well done! SK |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, man...they've both got it bad! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Incredible! Wish this was a movie...I'd love to watch the two of the interact. Great job |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow...a forceful man is so hot! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great start! Can't wait to read more. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The babies. Are just too cute! |