Reviews for Wished along a sinking medallion
VelvetyCheerio chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
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Wow, I loved the depth of this poem. Even though it was short, it packed a surprising punch that left me thinking about what the hidden meaning could be. It also contains a great sadness in its simplicity and I liked that you were able to convey that so easily.

Another thing I really liked was the imagery. The first two lines [I wished along a sinking medallion with/
hands held out together like a saint,] were beautiful while ambiguous. They inspire the reader to think deeper about what they want to see, but leave it completely open to interpretation.

At least, that's what I got out of it!

[and thought the very/thought to waste] I also liked this line's imagery. It makes it seem like the thought is something tangible, that it could waste away in a hand. It was very inspiring.

Good work on this poem, I enjoyed it!

Velvet.
Naver chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
I really enjoyed reading this one. I heard drums and a heart beat as my mind painted the scene, it was amazing. Every time I reread this I feel more connected to the piece, it's such a breathtaking feel, I love it.
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