Reviews for What business entails |
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![]() ![]() This piece of work does have potential, but you need to have more depth. More description. I am on the fence about this story. |
![]() ![]() I really like this, but if you proofread and replaced every "..." with a "." then I would love it, things like that can really yank you out of a story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved your story and how their relationship progressed. The characters were well described and developped. It was fantastic :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Myaaahhh I wish there were more men lick Nick... Dang men couldn't get their acts straight and be kind to their girls nowadays... or kind to their boys... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it XD I dun know if I should feel sorry... although Nick seems to have snatched a cute guy. :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww I hope Saeko and Quinn start talking soon. It's so cute when Nick and Quinn spend lots of time together |
![]() ![]() ![]() Still good! I do see a few capitalization errors, don't forget to capitalize your "I's". I really like the growing feelings between the characters though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Looks like Nick likes Quinn a little more than Quinn likes Nick... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, I like the build up to having them meet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() in reply to the last chapter the lemon was good, since it was a first time with the couple the little fumbles and things made it seem more real. with this chapter it was good and totally fluffy, i loved it ! but it seems like kind of a little filler, a good thing but dont over use it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I actually find this author's note hilarious, because it's currently the 31st of May. At exactly 5.29 am. I only found this story a few hours ago. Really enjoyed it and I'm delighted I'll only have to wait a few hours for the sequel! -Light |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it! They were so cute together. Poor gramps. Poor Nick. Please please please please please please please! Write the sequel. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awwwwww that was great! I loved the spin on the arranged marriage you did. I'm so looking forward to reading the sequal. Love the stoy congrats! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So sad that Preston couldn't last longer. Was glad to see Quinn and Sae make up. |
![]() ![]() OH my god you have me crying! The ending was so sad and sweet at the same time! I cant wait for the sequel |