Reviews for What business entails
MrSpud chapter 11 . 3/16/2014
This piece of work does have potential, but you need to have more depth. More description.
I am on the fence about this story.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/20/2014
I really like this, but if you proofread and replaced every "..." with a "." then I would love it, things like that can really yank you out of a story.
GerardtheMoose chapter 35 . 8/13/2013
I loved your story and how their relationship progressed. The characters were well described and developped.
It was fantastic :)
Angel Hertz chapter 32 . 7/21/2013
Myaaahhh

I wish there were more men lick Nick... Dang men couldn't get their acts straight and be kind to their girls nowadays... or kind to their boys...
Angel Hertz chapter 2 . 7/20/2013
Love it XD
I dun know if I should feel sorry... although Nick seems to have snatched a cute guy. :P
misspelledideas chapter 25 . 6/20/2013
Aww I hope Saeko and Quinn start talking soon. It's so cute when Nick and Quinn spend lots of time together
misspelledideas chapter 16 . 6/20/2013
Still good! I do see a few capitalization errors, don't forget to capitalize your "I's". I really like the growing feelings between the characters though.
misspelledideas chapter 5 . 6/19/2013
Looks like Nick likes Quinn a little more than Quinn likes Nick...
misspelledideas chapter 3 . 6/19/2013
Wow, I like the build up to having them meet.
CainynAJLB chapter 25 . 6/10/2013
in reply to the last chapter the lemon was good, since it was a first time with the couple the little fumbles and things made it seem more real. with this chapter it was good and totally fluffy, i loved it ! but it seems like kind of a little filler, a good thing but dont over use it.
LightTheVisionary chapter 35 . 5/30/2013
I actually find this author's note hilarious, because it's currently the 31st of May. At exactly 5.29 am.
I only found this story a few hours ago.
Really enjoyed it and I'm delighted I'll only have to wait a few hours for the sequel!

-Light
maryrayne chapter 34 . 5/28/2013
Loved it! They were so cute together. Poor gramps. Poor Nick. Please please please please please please please! Write the sequel.
smashthat chapter 34 . 5/25/2013
Awwwwww that was great! I loved the spin on the arranged marriage you did. I'm so looking forward to reading the sequal. Love the stoy congrats!
graywolf63 chapter 34 . 5/20/2013
So sad that Preston couldn't last longer. Was glad to see Quinn and Sae make up.
Ridehorses22 chapter 34 . 5/19/2013
OH my god you have me crying! The ending was so sad and sweet at the same time! I cant wait for the sequel
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