Reviews for What business entails |
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![]() ![]() ![]() T_T Awwww! Awesome story. Such a sad way to end it… I can't wait for the next one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can you correct all your grammar errors, please? It would really make this story better :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Gasp.! She likes Quinn.?! Not Nick.? :O and hey that's not fair for her to be mad at him BC she likes him and he's with Nick... Quinn likes guys.! And she knows that... Urg that girl... But I loved it none the less, lol and was just thinking about this story :) I swear your physic . |
![]() ![]() ![]() Only a couple most mistakes I saw. "Know" instead of "now", "my" instead of "me"… easily overlooked things. Can't wait for the next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hehe, it wasn't a huge mistake. I do it all the time. It was simply overlooked. I liked it better this way though, it seems more intimate. Yes? Maybe it's just me. Can't wait for the next chapter though! (Also this is posted on 27 because it wouldn't let me post a review on 28) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Scared, you aren't the one who is going to have a dick shoved up hi- Ahhmm…" I had to laugh at this part lol love it :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Scared, you aren't the one who is going to have a dick shoved up hi- Ahhmm…" My favorite part :P lmao I had to laugh when I read it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay it's official this is going in my favorites. I loved the story! I can't wait for more! I only saw one thing and that was the last chapter. Nick had a condom on, so unless it broke, he didn't technically fill Quinn… other than that awesome! That love scene was so cute~ |
![]() ![]() Did i read it right? Maya, Quinton's cousin, wanted to marry Quinton? 0.o ahaha Where i'm from thats totally illegal lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() How closed minded of Maya and her family. Glad they are leaving. Sooooo Happy for Nick and Quinn! Give us more please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() He finally got an engagement ring.! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really enjoying these two. Thanks for the new chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh more please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just love sae! She is so wild and outrageous. Finally...Nick and Quinns first kiss. Wonderful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Geez...Nick needs to loosen up some. |