Reviews for As We Are
denverreese chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
This is a nicely done poem. The different line lengths still find a way in rhythm. The only thing I saw is that in the line "Forever lost in the shadows of mind",I really wanted the word "the" so it would be "Forever lost in the shadows of the mind." Obviously, this is just a suggestion. I would rather you have it the way you want.

Denver
Princess-anna57 chapter 1 . 12/16/2012
This is a really good poem! Well done. Keep at it!

Anna