Reviews for Breaking Point
atlalok33 chapter 4 . 10/3/2013
ahhh, i really hope to see kier soon! this was such a great chapter and i could see the chemistry that was between aleya and kier. please update soon!
FamishedNight chapter 3 . 9/29/2013
megs chapter 3 . 9/29/2013
Loving this story! I can't wait for more. I noticed that you have had problems with people copying your stories. It's one of the reasons why I am afraid to post my own on this website or ones like it. However, I am enjoying reading yours. You really are a good writer.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/29/2013
Thanks for the update :)
megs chapter 2 . 9/28/2013
More? Lol
Guest chapter 2 . 6/18/2013
Ooh, I want to read more of this! I'm loving te dynamics between everyone. And her unknown past? Fills my insides with longing. I love this - keep the great work up
Lauren Stargazer chapter 2 . 6/10/2013
Hm. Aleya sure is going to be an interesting cookie to figure out (I type as I eat a cookie). I like her, though. I'm looking forward to finding out what will happen next with Aleya's brother. Keep up the great work!
Dominique Diane chapter 2 . 5/18/2013
Slightly confusing, I was expecting a Rai's and Kaila's story, but please if you put them in it, don't mess with the characters (it's a constructive critic, you know I love Burning Brightly!) I mean that Aleya is now in love with Kaila's or something! :)
Hope you update soon,
gulistala chapter 2 . 4/30/2013
Very interesting. How many years prior to Burning Brightly is this? Also, is Claudion the immortalis whose successor is Jaylon? If so, how does Jaylon have 1000years long of a feud with Kailas? Or are both Jaylon and Claudion immortalis simultaneously?
foreternity chapter 2 . 4/4/2013
omgg yay! you updated! :) this seems good so far! harper is kind of annoying :$ hopefully that changesss. (: update soon please!
FamishedNight chapter 2 . 4/2/2013
Awesome chapter!
beautyisanimperfection chapter 1 . 3/28/2013
I loved burning brightly and now im hooked onto breaking point so please update!
Challen Evergreen chapter 1 . 2/8/2013
I already loved Aleya from the tiny stint we saw of her in the other story, but I have a feeling she's going to be even more interesting then I even though. :)
Mazarine chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
interesting first chap and I totally LOVED your last storyy :)
Alaeryel chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
Rosie-I am already IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY! I know you have probably got several twists involved with Aleya that we will sporadically find out throughout this story BUT I AM DEFINITELY INTRIGUED AND CANNOT WAIT FOR MORE! DAMN BRILLIANT job here girl!
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