Reviews for fool's gold
DaraSerian chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
oooo, that's pretty cool. I really like the line "but he sinks with me," it is a powerful line.
Naver chapter 1 . 12/17/2012
This is a really good metaphor, I understand quite well what you mean. Like as you fall into the black abyss he steadily follows you wanted to help and connect with you, but you reject him harshly and he is engulfed. Well that's what I got, actually I think I'm wrong now, maybe? Hmm.. Is that it?