Reviews for The Middle
CovertEyes chapter 30 . 12/2/2020
Well, this was kind of cute, but it has some major problems. I don't know how this has so many positive reviews.

1. Wesley doesn't have bipolar disorder, he has serious anger issues. I hate that his tantrums were excused by carelessly slapping the term "bipolar" on him. Bipolar disorder is so much more than mood swings.

2. One dose of chemotherapy doesn't immediately mean you lose your hair.

3. Did Kat really have her cast removed after a couple of DAYS? *eyeroll*

4. Imagine being knocked on the head, kidnapped, and then threatened by someone with a gun. Then imagine your ex boyfriend dripping with sweat and blood tackling you (to save you, sure) and laying on top of you... With all his sweat and blood dripping onto you. Would your hormones really overpower the adrenaline? Would you REALLY want him to kiss you in those circumstances? Add that he put someone in a coma using his fists, made out with a girl two days before asking you to be your girlfriend, angrily broke up with you when you were worried about a friend, AND made out with your arch nemesis. Are anyone's hormones really powerful enough to still desire someone after all that?

I liked the characters, but I think there's more to a relationship than being attracted to someone. Wesley has a lot of growing up to do before he's ready for a stable relationship. Not only is he likely to cheat when he feels slighted by her, but his anger really could be deadly.
Otakuami chapter 30 . 10/17/2020
I love this story. The characters, the drama, tension and chemistry. The every changing plot, everything kept me on the edge to the absolute end. It was such a satisfying read especially to see. how mental health issues were also focused on like anxiety attacks, bipolar disorder etc. 3
Monique chapter 30 . 4/2/2016
Great story! I loved the chemistry between the two characters. Sure there was a part in the story that was full of action and sometimes a bit overly dramatic for a highschool setting but the characterization and complexity of characters more than made up for it. Love the ending! Loved the entire story! Thanks!
RandomRighter chapter 30 . 12/5/2015
So adorable. I loved it. I was tempted to review for every chapter just to vent about the feels your characters gave me. Loved the character development, the way the love life wasn't perfect, the way that accepting that they loved each other didn't come till the end. Beautiful.
somersaultkick chapter 30 . 10/22/2015
This story is very beautiful, it shows that everyone is given a chance to be loved. And yay I love the ending, I love it just the way it is. No bullcrap, just pure love.
mysterygirl450 chapter 30 . 10/6/2015
The end of the epilogue was amazing :)
LoveIs4EverCrazy chapter 30 . 6/17/2015
I am obsessed with this story. Wes and Kat are perfect for each other.

I have a question though, I was reading the sequal to this story and the next day when I went to check if you had updated it, it disappeared? You probly took it down but I really hope you continue with it
Meg chapter 10 . 5/21/2015
"I want you, I need you, oh baby, oh baby..." from 10 Things I Hate About You!

I haven't read very far yet, but I'm loving this story! ;)
jedbook chapter 14 . 5/12/2015
I think everyone hates Jayden now. He toyed with Kat from the beginning. He only truly wanted her when he knew he couldn't have her.
jedbook chapter 13 . 5/12/2015
This was a really cute chapter. I like Wes and Kat as a couple.
jedbook chapter 12 . 5/12/2015
Wes needs to loosen up. I think Kat is really good for him.
jedbook chapter 11 . 5/12/2015
I didn't exactly like it when the story jumped to Wes's point of view. It flowed better just from Kat's. Wes was kind of mysterious to me and I liked him like that.
jedbook chapter 10 . 5/12/2015
I loved the ending scene when they were in the snow together. I think she and Wes are perfect for each other.
jedbook chapter 9 . 5/12/2015
I'm glad you didn't pop him in this scene because it wouldn't have made sense. It's okay sometimes to not have chapters with certain characters.
jedbook chapter 8 . 5/12/2015
I don't like Amy much but I don't really want to see her get into a fight with Kat. Can't wait to see what happens next!
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