Reviews for One Moment
LiteratiLilac chapter 1 . 8/27/2013
I have chills. This was heartbreaking.
RiddleSolved chapter 1 . 12/19/2012
While a touching and and interesting topic, I feel the rhyming seems a bit forced at times instead of flowing naturally, and I also think the poem may have benefited from having paragraphs to ease the reading?
Mayu Sun chapter 1 . 12/18/2012
What happened was a tragedy :(
But your poem is lovely, made me cry...