This is so epic!

This story is beautifully written. I like it. Keep up the good job! :D

Oh my gosh i love this story can't wait to go to the next chapter :D

You are a awesome author and should never give up in what you do .

Awesome, am I the only one who reads this?

I had character(s) ideas, if you think they fit
The Harmonix twins
Paul & Helgrad
They have light blue hair, talk in unison, ice elementals, only difference is eye color, Paul has grey eyes while Helgrad has bark blue eyes, they normally wear white clothes, they fear fire for they think they are made of ice, they are 14, they steal the weirdest things, a hat, a sack of cloth, fake teeth, and many more, they love to cause mischief for everyone. Well I must bid thee ado I have work to do

Nice story I think this will turn out great you could turn this into a actual book series, if you did I would rush to the store and buy the first copy on shelves, Anyway I saw no error in this besides the fact that you put painting I think you meant panting as in breathing heavily and quickly.