Reviews for Brown Eyes
aurii chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
Wow this was super powerful... I don't usually like poetry but this nearly made me cry.
Miggles chapter 1 . 1/6/2013
Almost like poetry; love the way you describe the relentless passing of time. I didn't understand the rating until the very end - very powerful and sudden. :)
You seemed to make it both seem dreary; the passing of time without meaning, and sudden and shoking, with the suicide at the end. :D