Reviews for Lethal Trap
gulistala chapter 27 . 10/2/2016
Overall a very enjoyable, exciting read. I did not see the twist coming, and I love how there was a healthy dose of action and actual seriousness, it made this story more credible. I don't normally read crime but lately have been craving it, I'm glad I stumbled upon and read this. Great job!
Guest chapter 12 . 9/22/2016
Oh wow was he feeling vulnerable hence the move on Emily or has it been bothering since she showed up in his life? Hmm.
Guest chapter 7 . 9/21/2016
Uh-oh has the pub even opened yet?
Guest chapter 6 . 9/21/2016
I wonder Greg's up to. There's go to be a twist because of his deceit but what I have no idea. Emily's not going to know what hit her is she? Heck I wouldn't be surprised if Greg knew from day 1 where Emily was or was THE reason her parents got killed. Wow I want to punch this guy. Lying scumbag what is he up to.
Guest chapter 5 . 9/21/2016
Okay Eddie seems a bit too certain that Emily is dead. Why, has he been doing his own research?
Guest chapter 4 . 9/21/2016
Well I'll be...Arthur totally buys Greg's utter BS. Damn.
Guest chapter 3 . 9/21/2016
Wow what a lying piece of skanking crap?! Just found her? Try just found her MINUS 8 BLEEDING YEARS!
gulistala chapter 3 . 9/16/2016
Wow what a lying scumbag! Oh my what is that prick George up to?!
zxxphyr chapter 27 . 2/13/2016
I can't put my amazement and all other positive emotions into coherent words.
dnmann chapter 27 . 4/11/2015
Fun, exciting story.
Sianjali chapter 27 . 11/13/2013
This story of yours is great .
Continue writing n you'll go far !
-best wishes,
neha chapter 27 . 11/12/2013
Perfect story!
PaintedPicture chapter 27 . 10/7/2013
awesome story. I love it, so creative. At one point I thought that it was the CIA that did the child testing and Enoch was the good guys, but it turned out really good! I loved Emily's character, and Eddie, was awesome too :D
subtly.obvious chapter 27 . 6/9/2013
i love this story so much. I can't even express how much i love this in words. This is probably one of my favouritest stories on fictionpress that i've read recently. That is saying a lot. This is amazing.
azeeunlove chapter 27 . 6/8/2013
This plot was so well thought out and I love the characters! I admit that I was hoping for Nick instead of Eddie, but they seem perfect for each other too (:
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