Overall a very enjoyable, exciting read. I did not see the twist coming, and I love how there was a healthy dose of action and actual seriousness, it made this story more credible. I don't normally read crime but lately have been craving it, I'm glad I stumbled upon and read this. Great job!

Oh wow was he feeling vulnerable hence the move on Emily or has it been bothering since she showed up in his life? Hmm.

Uh-oh has the pub even opened yet?

I wonder Greg's up to. There's go to be a twist because of his deceit but what I have no idea. Emily's not going to know what hit her is she? Heck I wouldn't be surprised if Greg knew from day 1 where Emily was or was THE reason her parents got killed. Wow I want to punch this guy. Lying scumbag what is he up to.

Okay Eddie seems a bit too certain that Emily is dead. Why, has he been doing his own research?

Well I'll be...Arthur totally buys Greg's utter BS. Damn.

Wow what a lying piece of skanking crap?! Just found her? Try just found her MINUS 8 BLEEDING YEARS!

Wow what a lying scumbag! Oh my what is that prick George up to?!

I can't put my amazement and all other positive emotions into coherent words.

Fun, exciting story.

Hi,
This story of yours is great .
Continue writing n you'll go far !
-best wishes,
Sia

Perfect story!

awesome story. I love it, so creative. At one point I thought that it was the CIA that did the child testing and Enoch was the good guys, but it turned out really good! I loved Emily's character, and Eddie, was awesome too :D

i love this story so much. I can't even express how much i love this in words. This is probably one of my favouritest stories on fictionpress that i've read recently. That is saying a lot. This is amazing.

This plot was so well thought out and I love the characters! I admit that I was hoping for Nick instead of Eddie, but they seem perfect for each other too (: