Reviews for Lethal Trap |
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![]() ![]() ![]() PLEASE UPDATE SOON! Seriously, I just stayed up til 3AM rreading this, because I couldn't put it down.I'm very addicted to this plot, and love the characters, especially Eddie. I can't wait to see what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I was so thrilled to see an update for this story! You're a brilliant writer and honestly, I'll wait for as long as you need to write the next chapter. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I must admit: I got a bit teary-eyed during Eddie's little speech in the end. What are you gonna do with these two? Will Mary finally accept she's Emily? Like, seriously, no one can deny his own self, even if he thinks he hasn't been himself for a long time or that he doesn't deserve to be himself, and she has to accept that. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello, So this isn't really much of a review except I just want to say that this is a great story! Please update soon. :) |
![]() ![]() Please update soon, it's a great story, which feels close to a climax and it would be a shame to stop now! |
![]() ![]() ![]() God, I can't get over how good this is! I just can't get enough. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I REALLY LOVE THE PLOT I CAN EVEN SI MYSELF IN IT PLEASE FINISH THIS SO I CAN KEEP UP NICE PLOT BUT AVOID THE FOUL LANGUAGES _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, yes I already received it and replied, thank you very much! I love this chapter, it is freaking good. Also, I know I've already said this, and I think you told me you wouldn't but just for fucks sake, please, please, don't break James s heart |
![]() ![]() God, can you believe that despite everything, I am really happy for the way James is striking up to her? This story is really good, and definitely worth publishing sometime maybe |
![]() ![]() Oh god oh god oh god, I can't help but wonder what eddie will make of all this once he knows the truth. |
![]() ![]() I wonder what Eddie is going to make of this scene once he knows the truth, I mean, will he remember this and wonder what the heck? |
![]() ![]() please please please update¡ and also, ive been reading another one of your stories, and please, make this one have a happy ending, i know what you said about happy endings, but please, make everyone i care about stay alive, meaning, all primary characters, i mean, dont kill any of the carlsons or maybe mary or james and please, if someone falls in love dont keep them apart¡ also i read english is sort of your seconf language, from where are you? also, well, this is coming out more like a rant but well, i like this story very much so please update it quick¡ |
![]() ![]() Holy frigging shit you might as well update soon or I am positive I might die! Please please update, this is killing me! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "My cover's blown and everything's a mess, yet somehow I'm strangely calm because this is a territory I'm familiar with. I don't have to pretend anymore." - I cannot even explain my love for this sentence. Amazing stuff. Absolutely brilliant job on this chapter. The plot keeps on thickening and I love it. Please post more soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh my God, he knows... I can't quite express what I'm feeling and thinking right now... |