Reviews for Colorful World
ygg chapter 1 . 1/2/2013
A range of emotions and marvelously visualised scenes. Love how you chose each lines as it give a certain momentum to the poem. The last line is beautiful in its exhilarating anticipation and certainly engages the reader's imagination! Great work I must say!
RiddleSolved chapter 1 . 12/20/2012
A simplistic, and yet quite beautiful snapshot of emotions. I rather liked it!