Reviews for Little Purple Flowers
Felrain chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
This was great, very well done!
Prolix chapter 1 . 12/21/2012
I liked it overall. Short and sweetly melancholical, without an air of over sentimentality. I do wish you would extend it though, as of now it dosen't really sit as a true short story to me, more like an excerpt. That and extending the dialogue would provide room for narritive depth, which it is sorely lacking. There is potential for this to become quite the publishable short story, or if you really decide to push it, a novella. Overall, B (the plus because I found this on the day of the 'supposed' end of the world).

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