|Reviews for Fion Online|
| Upon the Wings of Angels chapter 5 . 8/8/2014
Nerp? Okay then. *trots over*
By the way, I like the name Aisha.
| Upon the Wings of Angels chapter 4 . 8/8/2014
*freaks out* AAH! AHH! AHH! AAH! O-dammit, I just got caught reading.
...Ok, coast clear.
This is really good! I like!
| xxxyx chapter 4 . 11/2/2013
Pfff... Seekrat... I was spot on in my last review. Couldn't you at least make some modifications, like, make it SeekRabbit or something? lol
Mysterious Stranger... heh
The horrors... of grinding.
Surround respawn points... right... funnily, no monster ever thought of that.
'We will protect the villagers in the treasury!' lol, a Leeroy Jenkins.
A fun, simple read, so far.
| xxxyx chapter 3 . 11/2/2013
Your choices of naming had a Malaysian 'ring' to it. Don't ask me how I know.
Lol the Spiderman-MJ paradox.
'Let me get this straight...you need slime gel so you can use it as hair gel?' - game logic! And... fyi, 3 dots are enough. And why does this strongly remind me of Adventure Quest Worlds?
| xxxyx chapter 2 . 11/2/2013
'Even if I work together with Tora and Ira, the total would just be level 9!' - lol, do you think it works that way? :3
Oh, they can still respawn, huh? But seriously King Bera, you think a wall of rocks will stop the players? And is that how a king fights? By walling himself in?
So you actually can explain things well enough... :P
'A slime, of all things, said.' lol.
Monster conspiracy yay! :3
| xxxyx chapter 1 . 11/2/2013
Hm, a starting like any other. Not much to comment.
Ah, the stats distribution intrigued me. Standard issue, though.
Ah, the concept is interesting. The killing AI and all. Lol, a mention of the Apartheid? Mother of Monsters. I think I heard that somewhere before though. Lol the feeling of happy newbies just discovering the game and all... :P
Anyway, not bad. I'll see how it goes on, then, shall we?
| I3MoMo chapter 3 . 2/18/2013
T.T ive been awful without my fion
| I3MoMo chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
its been almost 30 days without a new chapter T.T i miss it
| kingofe3 chapter 4 . 2/3/2013
Lots to take in. Interested to see where this goes.
Also: "Lane stood there. After a few seconds, he ran off to the village."
| I3MoMo chapter 4 . 1/24/2013
More please T.T
| Mikal Dan chapter 3 . 1/7/2013
Hey, Imran , LOVE your fanficts, especially this one. However , why not make the updates more frequent? Seriously,
| Nick chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Hey! I just barely heard of this ’’Sword Art Online'' yesterday. Is it a good Novel/Anime? Anyways, This chapter was pretty interesting! can't wait to read more!
| kingofe3 chapter 3 . 1/6/2013
I'm not sure leveling up gives you a completely new set of equipment, at least from what I know of online games. Anyway, it was nice chapter. Some nice foreshadowing in there as well.
| kingofe3 chapter 2 . 1/6/2013
Way late for this review. Anyway, it was a nice battle and surprised he managed to escape. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| KaiserSchwarz chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
I see the similarities you speak of, but I see the differences as well. You've got some unique ideas going for you, so I'm interested in seeing where that takes you.
Just some commentary -
The boss could have used some description. I can see the text telling me that Kazuya is scared, but see no descriptive explanation as to why other than the fact that this monster is a few levels higher and that he's a boss character. Could you figure something out that is visually scary about the lion? For normal people who do not play games, the fact that he's a boss will not intimidate them at all. They'll brush it off as, "Meh."
That, I like where you're going with this. As a gamer myself, I know that moment when I walk into somewhere and pick a fight with a monster only to realize that it's insanely powerful or requires a different strategy than what I'm used to and going, "Uh oh."
If you have time, could you check out my story, "Synchronizer" and review it too please?