|Reviews for Eyes that talk of faithless wars|
| True Talker chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Time can be the creator of light, Something that is not of fright, It is not something that causes dismay, It is a story of happiness created in a way, A way of what? You ask. A way to see the light within you, A way to feel the light within you, Time can create many beautiful things if you let it, As you are the writer of words that has inspired mine. Just think about that. Please?
| Nubby chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
I really liked your poem!
Though the two last lines are a little weak compared to the rest of the poem grammatically, and dramatically, I thoroughly enjoyed your poem till the end!