Reviews for Time, Or The Lack Thereof
Infinitely Silent chapter 1 . 5/6/2013
I know this is a love poem, but I thought of it as time wasting away. We waste our lives on such meaningless things, only to realize how pointless they are when it's too late. Masterfully done.
Perisada chapter 1 . 4/19/2013
Once again, the metaphor is used so well here. This poem is very technically well done, and while I don't get as much emotion coming through it as I do in some of your other poems, I really like the way you've built it up. This is a strong and insightful piece.
Beth Brooks chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
i love the imagery and flow, the light airy breeze it brings. but still a heavy message.