Reviews for The Soldier
Sonya P. May chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
A very powerful scene, static and deep despite the dynamic dialogue and short sentences. I liked it a lot. It made me think.
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2013
O.o That was haunting and beautiful. Thank you for sharing.
J.Kuzzey chapter 1 . 12/22/2012
I can picture this in my head pretty well. Strangely enough, I picture it so that their backs are to the audience - which is highly unusual in plays and generally speaking, kind of frowned upon. But I feel like it would work. As usual, your dialogue has great AWESOME flow! I can always hear the characters perfectly well in my head! There's some pretty deep stuff here, but I've learned to expect that from ya.

There's a distinct lack of extra detail as to the scene or the exact movements/expressions of the characters. I think it works well, since it gives the actors and director of the play a lot of room to do their own things.

And, once again, I can see this as part of a comic. Just sayin'!