Reviews for precious metal
Brianarae0408 chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
This poem is so good, I loved it. I especially like how you incorporated imagery in various ways. Also, your reference to Robert Frost's "Nothing Gold Can Stay" is really great.
blue eyed bitch chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
Aah, I forgot to log in before I reviewed. The review above is mine
Guest chapter 1 . 12/24/2012
nice job, you really captured the feeling of abandonment at the end.. i understand this poem. keep up the good work!