|Reviews for My Brothers Best Friend|
| grinningwillow chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
When I got to the bottom I had an intense sense of deja vu until I read the author's note.
| Fading-Scream chapter 1 . 12/26/2012
Looking like it's going to be a pretty good story like. No blatant spelling errors, although I'm sorry to say that your grammar needs some serious work... although that's not everyone's cup of tea. It would just improve the flow and quality of the story.
- "twin, who makes me some what popular" - "twin, which makes me some-what popular"
- Romeo and Juliet should be in italics as it's a name of a published book.
There's plenty more examples but wouldn't want to bore you with them. :) Perhaps you should maybe think of investing in a betareader.
Will follow it for the next few chapters to see if I like where it's going.
| L.Y Escape Reality chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
YAY IT'S BACK! Please please please update so very very
| mmfan29 chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
HOORAY! I've missed this story..glad you are on here again! Can't wait to see what changes you have in store!
| Alaeryel chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
Ok Beauty-this was a great start and I already love Isabella's personality-I cannot wait for more of this story-excellent story and amazing writing!
| a random gal xxx chapter 1 . 12/25/2012
My first thoughts were when I read the summary was: WAIT. Some bitch has copied STAYBEAUTIFULXO s story! And then I saw the author :) lool I'm such a spaz :( lool
I'm SO happy u restarted it . I'm ur first reviewer on this I think xx p.s hope u get better soon
Pp.s how's ur boyfriend? Xxx merry christmas