|Reviews for Voices in the Dark|
| OAC - QI chapter 22 . 11/9/2013
Well, I think what you're doing is a good thing, Nagwam. Always back-tracking is a good idea. I'll be waiting to see what you come up with. Oh, and I've quit workig on Prelude to Armageddon cause another project totally unrelated has claimed my attention, so no need for you to worry over it.
See you when you post the re-write. :D
Order and Chaos - Qui Iudicant
| Phillip chapter 22 . 11/9/2013
I have been caught up in your story and looking forward to the next chapter.
Maybe you are being too hard on yourself. There is no way that I could be a storyteller. I read and enjoy the imaginations of those gifted to share their writing skills with avid readers.
| tempest chapter 29 . 11/7/2013
keep it coming
| zipo chapter 28 . 10/18/2013
i love this story more and more with each chapter
| Order and Chaos - Qui Iudicant chapter 26 . 8/9/2013
Interesting. I wonder what Kevin is doing - or for that matter, what is Bijack thinking?!
I found "Sparky" to be hilarious, mostly because I have a character named that too! (Though my Sparky is a mental voice driving my main character nuts.) I'm looking foward to the next chapter, as always.
| ZenaraTheDragon chapter 26 . 8/8/2013
Heh, the Obelisk will forever be renamed Sparky in my head. XD The computer is awesome.
Aaand Kevin is evil now. Dangit. Y'know, the thing with him now really reminds me of the episode of Voyager where the Doctor's ethical subroutines got deleted... Yikes. Nothing scarier than an evil doctor. Cause they KNOW how to cut you up... You won't die... Yech.
| Order and Chaos - Qui Iudicant chapter 25 . 7/23/2013
Bijack's planning something and I'm not sure what it is. Keep up the good work.
| Guest chapter 24 . 7/8/2013
| RimaToya chapter 23 . 7/8/2013
AGH! this chapter was waaaay too short to satisfy my cravings for this awesome story of yours! Please do continue, I'm dying to know what happens next! D:
| Order and Chaos - Qui Iudicant chapter 23 . 7/8/2013
I wondered what happened to you; did you get wrtiers block or something? I dunno, whatever the reason, it must have been a good one. This is a good chapter, especailly the interogation sequence. Kevin's subconsciousness 'talking' to him; kinda reminded me of one of my characters on FFN, only my guy is a bit more annoying to his 'host'. ;)
Anyway, I hope you had a good time in resting up, cause its great to see you back here. can't wait for the next update.
| genesis chapter 22 . 6/21/2013
love this story when will chap 23 be coming
| Irony'sFriend chapter 22 . 5/26/2013
Oh my gosh, everything is getting so exciting! So now all of Logan's crew is captured by the Syndicate. I cracked up when Gregor threw that cup at Vysac. I agree with Logan. If he could sleep through that, he deserves to sleep in.
I really liked the scene with Fiona and Gydra. I especially like how Gydra described that she could only touch those who had "awake" souls. It was a good, truthful concept that I had never heard explained like that.
Great chapter! Can't wait to read more!
| Th' Tolimnes Davin chapter 3 . 5/24/2013
Wow, okay, a lot of interesting things going on here, I like it. I love how Logan's kinda lighthearted about things. Also I get the feeling you watch Star Trek. If so, that's cool. I'm a Trekkie myself, haha.
| Th' Tolimnes Davin chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
Nice. I honestly didn't much like Gregor in the first chapter, but I now I kinda feel for him. I like how you presented his background.
| Th' Tolimnes Davin chapter 1 . 5/24/2013
This is good! You've piqued my interest. The only critique I can offer is a couple of typos I noticed, but that's no big deal. Your grammar appears virtually spotless, and your description is excellent. I think it's funny how laxed the bridge crew is, I like that. I know it's only the first chapter, but Vanessa really jumped out to me. I think she's my favorite character so far. I'm off to read more!