great love that logan has a sister cant wait to see what happens next

hi i just was wondering if you are going to continue with the story

Fiona is such a cute character! In a story filled with serious and grim-faced soldiers, Fiona's carefree ways were a welcome contrast. It's even better to think that she's Logan's sister.

I DIED laughing when Gregor punched that guy, and Logan was like 'What? What? I was watching a cloud. Oh, look! He's fallen asleep!' Best ever! Definitely my favorite part.

It made me sad when Gregor had to face what the Syndicate had done though. I had a feeling he would go through this eventually, but that doesn't soften the blow. Being forced to question your own loyalties and morals is very difficult, no matter what.

This story seems to be going great! I look forward to the next chapter!

Whoa, a lot happened here! You do a really great job with action scenes, and you always manage to slip humor in when I least expect it. Great job!

This keeps getting better and better. Great job!

Wow, I actually did not see that coming at all. Logan and Vanessa are romantically involved? That's surprisingly adorable!

Also, the 'best pilot ever' bit made me laugh. That was a stroke of brilliance!

Logan has a sister? Out of everything that happened this chapter, this excites me the most. How interesting! I wonder what she'll be like... Keep writing!

well, well, this is getting very interesting can't wait for more

love this story, great writing style very clear and easy to read loveing Gregor

pretty good, waiting for next chapter

I am definitly looking foward to this! Awesome work!

Wow! A lot of information in this chapter! I though you were very creative with the alien species, and you had a lot of great ideas. I love their "inner soul" power. Very interesting!

And then the end :( Very sad and I wonder what will happen... ?

Also, I'm glad that Gregor and Logan are good again _ Great chapter!

I'm very glad that Gregor popped back into the story, but boy, did he make an entrance! I'm conflicted because I love Gregor and I don't want him hurt, but then again... That scene was awesome. It was genius to start the fight, put a line break, and then skip to the infirmary. It was funny and good writing, too!

Now I'm ready to know the story of Vysac! I'm very curious, and I can only imagine what sort of back story he has and how his wife ties into it. Maybe she was special in some way...?

As always, your writing is wonderful! I look forward to more!

I did not see that last part coming! Wow, you certainly have a knack for surprises. I like that a lot.

This certainly throws another loop in the plot, and I'm very impressed by how complicated it's becoming. Vysac has evolved into quite the interesting character, and now Captain Logan is increasingly intriguing. Is he the same species as Vysac perhaps? Or is he specially chosen for one reason or another?

As always, your writing style is very interesting, and I love your sense of humor. It is subtle, but hilarious. Keep up the good work!

Well, that's an interesting surprise! I like the twist that Vysac is an intelligent life from. And I like that he's on the captain's side now...or he seems to be. Maybe it's a trick, but I hope they form an alliance.

But where is Gregor? I suppose he's working on repairs, but I miss him being in the story. And Vanessa, too!

The story is really moving along, and I can't wait for more! I'm also curious as to what the 'drop off' is. So hurry and update!