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![]() ![]() ![]() Ha, cute. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really enjoyed this story. Your humor is . . . 'emotional intelligence of a Dorito' That's classic. The movie reviews were fun. I would have enjoyed more, but you only had one chapter so you couldn't do too many. I'll just have to think up my own one-liner movie reviews. Good story setting too. I've spent a lot of time in that movie rental store trying to select the perfect movie. Hey, I've got one both of your characters could agree on. It's an action adventure romance. "Avatar" Aw, don't laugh. JD Fly |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sigh. So cute. I feel like how she felt about movies with stories on FP. And movies. Sigh. I need a real life Patrick. Mayday mayday! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooh! This is brilliant, I adorec their argument and his plot summary. so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Of course you don't get it. You have the emotional intelligence of a Dorito." AHAHAHAHAHAHA AWWW THEY'RE SO CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW :DDDDDDD THAT WAS A HOT KISS BTW THEYR'E ADORBS There are some errors though, for example: ["Well I can't make it rain, so would you settle for kissing me next to the 'When Harry met Sally display."] that should probably end with a "?" right? And I think you used semi-colons incorrectly a couple times but I'm not sure...semi-colons are used to separate independent but related clauses, right? Something like that? Well anyways, I love this. If only I could find a guy like Patrick... |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story is amazing! You are an excellent writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Waah, that was adorable! I loved how she didn't recognize what he was hinting at. Their banter was really cute too. Great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh when you're a sucker for movies and books.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That's so cute! I loved it lol I wish we all had moments like this |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha very cute and funny. There were a couple of non-capitalizations and such, but nothing huge. All the quick back-and-forths about movies were really well done. Good read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. You do know your movies, whereas I only knew a few. Very cute story, I might add. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was absolute perfection. So cute and so well done. I loved all the movie references! Wonderful job on this :) |