|Reviews for Forged History|
| Mylilblackpen chapter 1 . 1/1/2013
There is something about this poem that is deeply thought provoking. It seems like a fantasy, but it seems like we've skipped ahead and are now at an action scene. I think it's a great piece though I am intrigued as to why the lies he/she has written down will have such grave effects. Though it is true, the past cannot be rewritten - ah! Maybe that's it, you can't rewrite the past with lies! Ah I'll be so happy if I worked that out. It seems to me, especially now I've worked that out, that this beautiful poem has a moral to it and a moral I hold very close to me. Brilliant piece, clever, intricate and fantastic imagery to say the least.
| Fuego En Mi Corazon chapter 1 . 12/30/2012
Well written, good form...Encore!
| Sapphy-Sweets chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
This reminds me of the Hobbit. I haven't even seen the movie. I have no idea why.
It reminds me of a mythological time period, with a sorcery book controlling the past. It's very mystical. I love it.
Happy writing, friend
| Key Atlas chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
I love the second line! It's so powerful! This is wonderful little poem!