|Reviews for Ice|
| Bri chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
This is amazing
| Morbid Quill chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Greetings B. R. Rose,
I enjoyed this little piece. It was short, but descriptive. You manipulate the English language well, managing to engage my emotions by employing few words. Your writing seems to be intentionally vague, shrouding even the clearest elements of your story in mystique. I commend you for this intriguing use of three hundred and sixty-two words. You have a fine talent.
However, I would have liked a little bit more elaboration on why Peter kissed Amelia - that moment of your story was somewhat confusing. Other than that, I see no problems with this piece.
I will definitely add this to stand among the other submissions on my Favorite Stories list.