|Reviews for After Midnight|
| Not just Ordinary chapter 4 . 10/29/2013
Freaky... Thanks for the advice to read during the day!
| phantom130 5 chapter 4 . 2/23/2013
Was it weird of me to imagine my character Dan while reading this? Sometimes I like to sub my characters into my mind while reading short stories. It makes it more fun lol. I think I'm going to make a character named Victor, based on this. :P
| phantom130 5 chapter 3 . 2/23/2013
The beginning really reminded me of myself. I can't stand the silence.
| phantom130 5 chapter 2 . 2/23/2013
Spooky. Nice job :P
| phantom130 5 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
I love the idea of this. Can't wait to read on :D
| WhiteRose1805 chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
Whoa. That guy is a psychopath, calling the other guy Victor so many times and thinking he did anything.
| Torey Hylton chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
I love that last line. Good one, but I did notice that you mixed up your tenses. Choose a tense (past, present etc) and try to stick with that. Hope this helps!
| Torey Hylton chapter 3 . 1/7/2013
Another scary one, good job!
| Torey Hylton chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
This one was scary! Your writing isn't the best out there, but still good :)
| ChibiJinchuuriki chapter 4 . 1/6/2013
Ooooh after I read that last line, everything went so silent...
I suspected that the branch was a limb of some kind, I was right! XD
| ChibiJinchuuriki chapter 3 . 1/5/2013
I applaud thee CbS! Once again... the ending gave me shivers :S
Luckily I'm reading this in the afternoon while the sun is still up XD
| ChibiJinchuuriki chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
Ohhhhh the empty eye sockets bit at the end really got to me :S
The build up of suspense was great!
| ChibiJinchuuriki chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
You're right about the first chapter not being creepy, but it is pretty mysterious. I'm still left wondering what the main character is or looks like exactly XD
| WhiteRose1805 chapter 3 . 12/30/2012
Who the heck is he, I can't think. Maybe he's silence, hmmmmm.
| WhiteRose1805 chapter 2 . 12/30/2012
I love reading this for some random reason.