Reviews for After Midnight
Not just Ordinary chapter 4 . 10/29/2013
Freaky... Thanks for the advice to read during the day!
phantom130 5 chapter 4 . 2/23/2013
Was it weird of me to imagine my character Dan while reading this? Sometimes I like to sub my characters into my mind while reading short stories. It makes it more fun lol. I think I'm going to make a character named Victor, based on this. :P
phantom130 5 chapter 3 . 2/23/2013
The beginning really reminded me of myself. I can't stand the silence.
phantom130 5 chapter 2 . 2/23/2013
Spooky. Nice job :P
phantom130 5 chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
I love the idea of this. Can't wait to read on :D
WhiteRose1805 chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
Whoa. That guy is a psychopath, calling the other guy Victor so many times and thinking he did anything.
Torey Hylton chapter 4 . 1/7/2013
I love that last line. Good one, but I did notice that you mixed up your tenses. Choose a tense (past, present etc) and try to stick with that. Hope this helps!
Torey Hylton chapter 3 . 1/7/2013
Another scary one, good job!
Torey Hylton chapter 2 . 1/7/2013
This one was scary! Your writing isn't the best out there, but still good :)
ChibiJinchuuriki chapter 4 . 1/6/2013
Ooooh after I read that last line, everything went so silent...
I suspected that the branch was a limb of some kind, I was right! XD
ChibiJinchuuriki chapter 3 . 1/5/2013
I applaud thee CbS! Once again... the ending gave me shivers :S
Luckily I'm reading this in the afternoon while the sun is still up XD
ChibiJinchuuriki chapter 2 . 1/5/2013
Ohhhhh the empty eye sockets bit at the end really got to me :S
The build up of suspense was great!
ChibiJinchuuriki chapter 1 . 1/5/2013
You're right about the first chapter not being creepy, but it is pretty mysterious. I'm still left wondering what the main character is or looks like exactly XD
WhiteRose1805 chapter 3 . 12/30/2012
Who the heck is he, I can't think. Maybe he's silence, hmmmmm.
WhiteRose1805 chapter 2 . 12/30/2012
I love reading this for some random reason.
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