Reviews for Wicked
TheLadyTell chapter 1 . 2/7/2013
I like your set-up here, it's vague but mysterious and thus engaging. You do a nice job of playing with the preexisting relationship between the two while leaving the reader to fill in the details. But I had a bit of trouble distinguishing between what was happening with Niles versus his teacher. I assume you left the teacher nameless to add to the sense of mystery, but I think it would help the reader if you could show more explicitly with formatting or more precise labels when each character is speaking. Especially in the first few lines, the "hes" were a little tricky. Happy writing