Reviews for A Little Bliss In Paris
SunsetSprite chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
Okay, it's a good story!
Although, I would prefer if the chapters are on different pages, if you get what I'm on about.
Also, you seem to put both speakers on one line. You should try putting a different speaker one a different line.
For example...
Instead of - "What's that?" He says. "Oh, nothing really." She adds.
You should do this - "What's that?" He says.
"Oh, nothing really." She adds.
You understand in what I'm trying to tell you?
Other than these, awesome story!