|Reviews for After the last betrayal|
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/4/2013
GREAT! DESERVES A GRADE A RIVIEW! It sounds like you had fun making this too. Very nice, great punctuation, but you use ... too much but other then that. It's great!
| xXKutlessXAngelXx chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I love it!, but the style that it's written in isn't quite right ;;
You might wanna try writing it more like a regular book would be, this makes it easier to explain certain things.
Getting someone to show you the ropes is probably what you need most
Ah, but i reaaaalllllyy love it, it also surprised me you're only in the 6th grade (gosh, this is so much better than the crap i wrote then lol) adorable Maka pic btw